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"Look, Sev!" by JosieCarioca "Look, Sev!" by JosieCarioca
"Look, Sev! A ______________!" (fill in the blank ;P)

Anyways, another thing I owed myself for the longest time... A Severus x Lily fanart. Im not a big fan of Lily to be honest (she never got enough character development for me to have a solid opinion on her), but as a Snape fangirl I simply have to aknowledge that shes the reason my favorite character is everything he is...therefore shes a big part of the reasons that make me I love him, so I need to show some respect from time to time :P

So, there it is, Sev, Lily in a random summer afternon playing by the river (assuming that stinky river that crosses Cokeworth was clean when they were children :P)

This is dedicated to :iconameraucanablues: and :iconca-cha: both of whom urged me to draw some Sev x Lily


(Grass brushes by :iconiceytina: [link])
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H-A-Cooke Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
VISION: 4/5

A vivid "in-the-moment" shot. The expressions on their faces reflect how I imagine their friendship to be, Lily is vivacious and bright and Severus enjoys being around her, but reacts calmly and takes a while to smile. The body language really brings that to focus. 

ORIGINALITY: 3/5

The focus of the image is what sets it apart from similar scenes. Lily is the focus, despite the action being her pointing across the lake. It is a little off-putting - if your intention was to focus on something across from the lake - that Severus is looking at the center of the picture at Lily and the viewer rather than what Lily is saying. 

TECHNIQUE: 4.5/5

Focus Point:  The eye of the viewer is drawn to Lily's expression of excitement and follows her pointing finger. Although in character, Severus' line of sight being on Lily distracts from the moment and removes him from the action. If you were to re-draw this or do a similar scene I'd suggest both characters should look in the same direction - even though Lily's eyes are visible to the reader they still focus on a different area than Severus.

Proportion: Perhaps the biggest strength of your piece. Your drawing style is very unique, and it's refreshing to see proportionate bodies. Although, it's distracting that Severus has no nipples (a detail I only noticed on this re-view. 

Color Contrast/Compliment:  Another strength is the way colors work together to form the atmosphere of the scene. blending to accent the light. 

IMPACT: 4/5

When I first saw your drawing I considered asking if I could use it as a cover image for my fanficiton (but ultimately went with another one). This is  a really nostalgic scene to me, and i really enjoy it and it makes me happy. 
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JoeMerl Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Student Writer
Nice work!
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Gryffgirl Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
You've been featured: [link]
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Zero12354 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
"Look, Sev! Your potions book!"
"Oh WTF?! How did it get there?!"
"I chucked it there!"
"Oh damn you!"
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StarPyre Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"Look Sev! James Potter! Oh isn't he handsome?"
Snape: ... ( ._.) No.

LOL, I do think Sevarus looks adorable and Lily looks... normal? I wanna hug him.
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JosieCarioca Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"Look Sev! James Potter! Oh isn't he handsome?"

ಠ_ಠ


Yeah, everybody said Severus looks cuter than Lily ^^;.. I guess my favoritism is showing here a bit...Just dont tell anyone, Im sticking to my official esxcuse "I just dont draw little girls as well as I draw little boys" :giggle:

I WANNA HUG HIM TOO!!! :LOVE:
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AllysonCarver Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"Look, Sev! it's Chuck Norris!"
:iconchucknorris:
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JosieCarioca Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG! :faint:
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Miss-Jose Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
Sev looks so cute, while Lily doesn't... I think there's some favoritism here :D
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JosieCarioca Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Favoritism? MOI?! Well I reject and denounce your unfair and unbased accusations!:stare: ;P
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